The chart shows the results of a survey conducted in the UK in three different years regarding the levels of interest in 6 particular years

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The chart shows the results of a survey conducted in the UK in three different years regarding the levels of interest in 6 particular years

The provided bar graph illustrates the results of a survey conducted in the UK in the three various years according the level of interest in 6 particular sports.

At the first glance, it is evident that in the year 1995 people were highly interested in playing football their interest was more than 40% which increased in next years as well. Followed by the rugby where 32% interest of people was observed in the year 1995, after that their interest towards rugby grown up and reached roughly 38% in the year 2005.

Turning towards the further information, approximately similar proportion of interest accounted for two sports swimming and volleyball. It was around 29% in both sports in year 1995 and rose up to 30% in the year 2005. It is surprising to notice that only in tennis level of interest of people declined gradually from about 31% in the year 1995 to 29% in the year 2005. However, in the golf interest of people also inclined but it was below 20%

Overall, interest of people towards various sports increased in the given years except tennis where interest level went down.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80423280423 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46917107559 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534391534392 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8722222134 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.714285714 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367266899102 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195818499506 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122458468939 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264998341016 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11830968361 0.0819641961636 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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