The charts below compare five different countries, showing the electricity used (measured in megawatts or MW) in a typical hospital during one week, and also the number of emergency medical calls made by local residents during the same week. The last chart shows the average time (in minutes) spent on assessing emergency cases by hospital medical staff before the patients are treated.
The given charts reveal some information about consumption electricity in hospital, number calls made by denizens and mean time for assessing emergency cases by hospital’s employment for six different countries.
As far as electricity used is considered, it goes through nuanced erratic changes throughout the week in France and japan with an approximately average 32 and 18 MW respectively. In Canada and Russia, consumption electricity modestly climaxes towards the end of week, 38 and 24 MW on Sunday respectively, while halving in value in Argentina.
As regard to number of calls, it considerably increases in Canada and Russia at the weekend, especially in Russia which doubles. Over the week in French and japan, the number of calls for both of them mildly rises and falls around 110 and 90 respectively. However, in Argentina, the number marginally slides down towards the weekend.
Turning to medium time spent by hospital staff for emergency cases, this average quite remain the same in whole the week in Argentina (12 minutes), albeit becoming twice times in Russia (from 12 to 28 minutes) by the end of the week. In France, Canada and japan, it experiences a period of volatility, with a more or less average 13, 11.5 and 15.5 respectively.
In summary, it seems there is a roughly direct relationship between the number of calls and electricity used. Although just in France, Russia and japan between the calls and average time assessment the same pattern can be seen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in summary, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16049382716 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95172766957 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9531282939 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.4 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205227971214 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768108357763 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486444399116 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113436195991 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336985422486 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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