The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 an the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

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The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 an the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

The first bar chart depicts the changes in the number of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1970 to 2000 while the second one illustrates the figures for the marital status, never married, married, divorced and widowed, of American adults in 1970 and 2000.

It is clear, in general, that although there was a fall in the number of marriages in the USA, the number of marriages was always higher than that of divorces during the period. Besides, the majority of adult Americans were married in both two years, 1970 and 2000, but the proportion of single adults was higher in 2000.

To specify, there were 2.5 millions of marriages and 1 million divorces in the USA in 1970. The marriage rate remained stable in the next ten years but dropped to 2 million by the year 2000. In contrast, the divorce rate reached a peak in 1980, at nearly 1.4 million divorces, before falling back to 1 million at the end of the period.

As the marital status is concerned, around 70% of American adults were married in 1970, but this figure dropped to just under 60% by 2000. Similarly, the percentage of widowed decreased slightly accounted for around 5%. The proportion of divorces, in comparison, was almost negligible in 1970 and rose significantly to about 10% in 2000. Likewise, unmarried adults climbed from 15% to 20% after 30 years.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...r in 2000. To specify, there were 2.5 millions of marriages and 1 million divorces in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, likewise, second, similarly, so, while, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49730830125 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8196989958 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.2 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407435673785 0.215688989381 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148621020611 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946144669173 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240993131888 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601580997444 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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