The charts below give information about world forest in five different regions Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words

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The charts below give information about world forest in five different regions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of world forest and timber in 5 various regions.
It is noticeable that the percentage of global forest in Africa is the highest, the opposite is true for the figure in Asia. Also, while the share of timber in North America is the highest, the rate of Africa in this category is the lowest.
Africa makes up 27% of the percentage of global forest, compared with 25% and 18% recorded in the figure of that in North America and Europe, respectively. In terms of timber, a mere 9% goes to Africa while the rate of timber in Europe is 20% and North America takes the largest proportion of timber, at 30%.
Turning to the other categories, the share of world forest in South American is 16%, 2% higher than the proportion of that in Asia. This trend can also be seen when we look at the second pie chart. To be specific, South America accounts for 23% of the percentage of timber while the equivalent figure in Asia is 20%.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the figure of that in North America and Europe, respectively. In terms of timber...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47159090909 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42771930476 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482954545455 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.415444744 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0724489815134 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390735453621 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326925204065 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564045068952 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318157422432 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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