the charts below give information on ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The following pie charts show the age distribution of two different countries, Yemen and Italy, in 2000 and how the ages of their population will change by 2050.
As can be clearly observed from the pie charts, whereas the majority of people which was about 50.1% were children up to 14 years old in 2000 in Yemen, the prediction illustrates around 37.0% of Yemen population will be under 14 year by 2050. while the share of people over 60 will increase slightly from 3.6% in 2000 to 5.7% in 2050, the 15-59 years age group will observe a remarkable climb from 46.3% to 57.3% within the first half of 21th century.
With regard to Italy, the proportion of elderly people shall approximately double from 24.1% to 42.3 during 2000 to 2050. Unlike the fact that the quota of children under 14 years old was 14.3% in 2000, there will be a slight decline and will reach 11.5% in 2050. The same trend about adults between 15 to 59 years old is accessible and the percentage of this age group from 61.6% will fall sharply to 46.2% according to projections for 2050.
It is clear from the pie charts that Italy will have far more above-60-year-old population in 2050 than 2000. By contrast, Yemen will witness a situation that more than half of its population will be between 15 to 59 years old adults by 2050.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...pulation will be under 14 year by 2050. while the share of people over 60 will increa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, whereas, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55744680851 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44993324989 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536170212766 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7229446551 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.875 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.375 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16123038984 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929425191725 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046412825955 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128386448924 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375932362659 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.88 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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