The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart give information the proportion in typical meals of three kind of nutrients, all of them may be unhealthy if eat so much.
It is clear that the average percentages of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in meals are increased by Americans. Overall, snack of added sugar is higher than sodium and saturated fat. Dinner of added sugar is lower than the others.
Look at the sodium compares with added sugar, we can see that 14% and 42% of snack respectively. And the dinner accounted for 43% of sodium is higher than added sugar is 20 per cent, they are consumed by Americans so which may be unhealthy if people live in USA eat so much.
However, the lunch of saturated fat is higher than added sugar and lower than sodium is 26%; nearly 20% and 29% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
...he proportion in typical meals of three kind of nutrients, all of them may be unheal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 648.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59574468085 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48003952518 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560283687943 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0071422195 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137612063076 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075053156052 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112667825528 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11227018209 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128811255399 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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