The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Three pie charts depict the average percentages of how sodium, saturated facts and added sugars in breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks consumed in the USA, which may cause health issues due to excess consumption.

Overall, added sugar is the most significant nutrient in snacks in contrast it is the least significant nutrient in breakfast. On the other hand, sodium contains highly in dinner whereas it is the lowest contribution to both breakfast and snacks. Nutrient as saturated fat makes the biggest proportion of the dinner and the smallest proportion allocates to breakfast.

Breakfast contains 14% of Sodium and 16% of both saturated fat and added sugar and it is the meal which is having the less nutrients. Lunch consists of 29% sodium, 26% of saturated fat and 19% of added sugar. Dinner illustrates as the meal which has highest nutrients where it comprise 43% of sodium, 37% of saturated fat and 23% of added sugar. Higher contribution of the added sugar depict in the snack as 42% and sodium and saturated fat contains 14% and 16% respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...st proportion allocates to breakfast. Breakfast contains 14% of Sodium and 16%...
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... and it is the meal which is having the less nutrients. Lunch consists of 29% sodium...
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...al which has highest nutrients where it comprise 43% of sodium, 37% of saturated fat and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, whereas, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05649717514 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74001397689 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480225988701 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5894559526 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0759429805349 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389224384492 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461593305897 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647111266437 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467727689415 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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