The charts below show information about the electricity generation in two countries in 2009.
The first pie charts illustrate how electricity is manufactured in two European countries, Germany and France, while the second charts detail renewable energy sources there. The data from all diagrams are assessed from 2009.
In general, Germany produced 560 billion kWh of electricity units and France did 510 billion kWh. Renewable energies were slightly more popular in Germany and interestingly, geothermal energy was used by none.
In Germany, conventional thermal was the primary source of electricity (59.6%) while nuclear and renewables constituted 23% and 17.4% of the whole production. If we look at France, the nation relied three-quarters of its electricity on nuclear energy. Other methods such as conventional thermal and renewables contributed only around 10%.
On the other hand, over one-third of the renewable energy in Germany came from biomass and wind. They are followed by hydroelectric (17.1%) and solar (6.1%) technologies. However, French people depended on hydroelectric for the overwhelming majority (80.5%) of renewable energy. Biomass was not quite as reliable as wind with 8.1% and 10.5% in turn. Solar possessed merely 1%, about 6 times as much was used by Germans.
- The maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 73
- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 78
- The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010 78
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 89
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t 6 times as much was used by Germans.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, third, while, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53804347826 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97403301945 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.107489838 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6363636364 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105929512395 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354611590965 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454043822966 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671690602322 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060324266012 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.