The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B

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The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B.

As a rule, the introvert is more of a passive person, but in many cases, this is only visible passivity. The fact is that introverts tend to think deeply, and their activity is more expressed in mental research, than in continuous action and pathos behavior. From the outside, it always seems as passivity and lack of involvement. This formulation perfectly describes me.

Overall, in both countries A and B, people who work in the services area make up the highest percentage. For the two remaining fields, whilst workers in country A are preferable in agriculture, the proportion of men and women working in the industry of country B is higher compared to country A.

The percentage of employees who work for country B is skewed over the services, in which female workers constitute the highest at 88%. Men in country B account for 65% in the same area, more than the male and female workers in country A that merely land at 56% and 49%.

However, both men and women in region B have the lowest proportion in agriculture, which are only 3% and 1%, in comparison to the same workforce in country A. The trend in the industry in country B, nevertheless, in a total of 43%, is roughly double in the total proportion of region A. Noticeably, men who are working in these fields have a predominant percentage than women in both countries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'services'' or 'service's'?
Suggestion: services'; service's
...untries A and B, people who work in the services area make up the highest percentage. Fo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ining fields, whilst workers in country A are preferable in agriculture, the proporti...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, nevertheless, so, in many cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72340425532 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80711119228 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502127659574 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.721343431 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.909090909 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302182035197 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106226737582 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114021777346 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187289113434 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139531880033 0.0819641961636 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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