Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is an assertion among people whether they should tie their companionship to only a particular organization, whereas others presume to work for other companies as well. To some extent, both views appear beneficial, however, I believe it depends on the demand of workers as well as the working environment.
it is common to notice a few seasoned workers in a company where they have been contributing devotedly to their organizations and tend not to pack in to work for any others. These employees may think that their jobs are undoubtedly rewarding, bringing together people with a shared enthusiasm to work for such a desirable place. this only happens due to a litany of special policies that managers reasonably treat their staff, creating an environment in which ideological conflicts or even cognitive dissonance can be unanimously freed of.
On the other hand, humans may long for a breath of fresh air in their majorities, as a result, they would likely scour for other companies or to be a flexible freelancers. it is hard to nail down the reason, but perhaps it is owing to poor working conditions when some people are not treated equally, in addition, to an unpleasant working environment after. Apart from this, people could find that their initial sectors have no more interest to be followed. Therefore, leaving is irrefutable.
To recapitulate, more and more organizations have been cropping up everywhere, and all qualified employees are welcome. To spend the whole life engaging in only or multiple companies is merely a matter of fact. As long as humans can remain ambitious and find working is not an obligation but a way to reach a sustainable life, every exertion is worth it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...eve it depends on the demand of workers as well as the working environment. it is com...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...s well as the working environment. it is common to notice a few seasoned work...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...asm to work for such a desirable place. this only happens due to a litany of special...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'freelancer'?
Suggestion: freelancer
...for other companies or to be a flexible freelancers. it is hard to nail down the reason, bu...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...panies or to be a flexible freelancers. it is hard to nail down the reason, but pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, apart from, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04577464789 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94247187682 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6716515195 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350703625306 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1108821368 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745449840786 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20474101837 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508572947842 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.