The diagram shows the different stages in the production of woollen goods.
The diagram depicts how wool is manufactured to make woolen products. Overall, the production of wool encompasses five main stages classified into two procedures, in which wool is collected manually and undergoes mechanical processes to eventually produce woolen goods.
From the outset, wool is sheared from sheep on the field. Once the wool is harvested, it will be sanitated and will be dehydrated using a drying machine. The dried wool is then carded in order to hinge the separated wool together into a larger tuft of wool. Wool that is not properly carded is called "string", which is recycled afterward.
Blocks of wool tufts are retained in several storages. After a certain amount of time, the stored wool is now ready for the spinning process. This entails balls of yam to be produced. It is the chief material for knitting and in the weaving industry with some products such as jackets or carpets.
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- The diagram shows the different stages in the production of woollen goods 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84799374868 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660130718954 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1877944434 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.055178762276 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217026302594 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337195135438 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463213280707 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448357649523 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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