The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six different areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The six pie charts illustrate the distribution of water used for three main purposes in industry, agriculture, and domestic uses, which correspond with six typical areas in the world. Overall, a huge amount of water is served for the industry and farming while household use takes a little amount of water.
As can be seen from the picture, in the industrial field, Europe is the area which uses the highest amount of water, taking 53 %, followed by North America with a slightly lower 48%. In the other regions such as South East Asia, South America, Africa, and central Asia, the total amount is much less than 15%, taking 12%, 10%, 7%, and 5% respectively.
The demand for using water in agriculture is different in each area, central Asia is on top with 88%, Africa, South East Asia, and South America is the next one with 84%, 81%, 71% respectively. Finally, around one-third of the water is used in North America and Europe.
Lately, in the domestic field, South America is the region which has the highest water provision, for 19%, whereas central Asia and South East Asia witness the lowest percentage, both equally 7%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... less than 15%, taking 12%, 10%, 7%, and 5% respectively. The demand for using w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, third, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83505154639 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41216509259 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5363131022 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179038972912 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956775556033 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775861989517 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117625803302 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867205224538 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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