The Bar charts illustrate water usage in percentage for various needs in six different areas worldwide. Mainly, water is used in three categories: industrial, Agricultural and domestic.
Overall, among the various categories, the highest percentage of water used is for Agricultural and farming needs in the world, and the minuscule percentage used is for Domestic reasons.
In North America, 48% of water is necessary for the Industrial segment, 39% is used for agricultural use, and the remaining 13% is used for domestic requirements. Whereas in South America, the highest with 71% of water, is needed for agriculture and with 19% for domestic purposes and with Lowest per cent with 10%, for industrial usage. However, Europe is using the highest percentage of water for Industrial needs and 32% for the Agricultural group and only 15% for domestic purposes.
In the remaining countries such as Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, the highest percentage of water is required for Agricultural basis at 88%, whereas for domestic needs only 7 to 9 per cent of water is used and for industrial usage, the water used is 5 to 12 percentage approximately.
- The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumption 78
- In many countries the governments like to spend more money on the arts Some people agree with this However others think government should spend more on health and education Discuss both sides and give your opinion 89
- The diagram below shows the various stages involved in the production of beer 11
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car busor train between 1970 and 2030 78
- The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 286, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the Lowest'.
Suggestion: with the Lowest
... and with 19% for domestic purposes and with Lowest per cent with 10%, for industrial usage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18518518519 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96243381518 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455026455026 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6440997153 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264070327321 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166298935465 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597164231612 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207044783203 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319837096974 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.