Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Whether the internet supports younger people and workers to fulfill their educational and occupational aims easier than before has become a topic of controversial.As for me, I completely advocate for the idea argue that the advent of the internet has brought many positives to both the young and laborers, as now will be explained.
To begin with, students can benefit from the internet through online learning process.this is perfectly exemplified in case of the covid-19 pandemic,all around the world, educational institutions were looking toward online learning platforms to continue with the process of educating the students.Thanks to the internet, any kind of knowledge is available within just a click of a mouse. A particular example of this is azota,where students could save their assignments on the internet, make it more convenient to share with their classmates for peer review sessions or with their teachers. As a result, the quality of learning was not only guaranteed but also reduced potential cases at that time.
Furthermore, the internet has been an indispensable tool to any person who want to have opportunity for career development as well as scholarship.There are many useful websites specializing in providing information, registration instructions, and access to scholarships from domestic and foreign universities. this helps young people have good fortune to win scholarships from countries around the world. many young people have had the opportunity to work and live abroad through a special training program that links between countries. For example, vlogger Khanh Vy has owned a full scholarship from the British government, etc.Consequently, the advent of the internet help promote knowledge of Vietnam to the world, helping to improve the quality of labor of our country.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I maintain that both young people and workers should be encouraged to take advantage of the benefits of the internet. it is advisable that individuals take the appropriate initiatives to get access to huge resources available on the internet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, well, as for, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46483180428 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22360424818 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.8895295729 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.7 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0577511138015 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257924638676 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243251719518 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0338214364091 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114010465237 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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