the charts below show the precentage of water used for different perposes in six area of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the water using rate in different fields in 6 regions around the world.
Overall, using of water in agriculture is the most common in the South america, Africa,Central asia and South east asia, another hand the North american and Europians spend highest amount of water in industry.
In terms of countries which devote more than 70% of their water sources for agriculture, it can be seen that they use 12% and less in industrial use.
In contrast, countries which direct about half of amount of water in artificial purposes they spend around one-third of amount on planting.
also domestic use in the North america and europe is higher than other places.
- the charts below show the precentage of water used for different perposes in six area of the world. 56
- Research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 11
- life was better when technology was simpler.to extent do you agree with that? 84
- Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility for sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- life was better when technology was simpler.to what extent do you agree or dis agree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Central
...most common in the South america, Africa,Central asia and South east asia, another hand ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spend the highest'.
Suggestion: spend the highest
...r hand the North american and Europians spend highest amount of water in industry. In term...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ulture, it can be seen that they use 12% and less in industrial use. In contra...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...und one-third of amount on planting. also domestic use in the North america and e...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...und one-third of amount on planting. also domestic use in the North america and e...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, third, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 582.0 965.302439024 60% => OK
No of words: 115.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06086956522 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.27472217062 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55637384961 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64347826087 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 174.6 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6271848792 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213150026242 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118101121665 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890676651084 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118101121665 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890676651084 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.