Research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Trading agreements and internship have been widespread around the world according to a study. This essay agrees that the benefits of this devolopment are more its negtive effects because this helps in saving time and money. Thsese two advantages will be discussed as follows.
Many people around the world prefer achiving bussiness activities such as selling, paying and learning matrials regarding commerice over the internet in order to avoid wasting time. Working or learning over the internet means that the person has not to use car to access the work place; in addtion, it means tasks could be done in late time like after midnight, which allows to manage the time actively. For more clarification, a survy was conducted; In 2014, in Al-Riyadh thcapital city of saudi arabia showed that the rate of bussines men who use websites to do their works has been rising for 10 years by 20% as a result of the high speed of deals achivement.
No one can deny that the prices of the most servces and items via the internet are sheaper than anywhere else due to the low value of projects capitals over the interet. Launching a project online some times needs Facebook page only or a small application and ussualy these kinds of bussiness do not cost much of money. For example, in the persent time youtubers run massive bussiness over their channels which did not cost unless good internet connection by 20$ at most.
In conclusion, the advantages are more than disadvantages regarding runing commericial projects online because that leads to save time and money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97727272727 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54671404175 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632575757576 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3614229771 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.4 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0711084806804 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029605006129 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319755512982 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516843657214 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318619543662 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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