The pie charts illustrate the reasons of people who go to work by bicycle and people who drive to work. This reasons for people who cycle are; Health and fitness, Less pollution, Parking problems, Costs and Quickness. In the other hand the reasons of the people who used car to go to work are; Comfort, Distance, Quickness, Carrying stuff easily and trustworthy. The results which are given in pie charts is by percentage.
Overall, people who used bicycle to go to work do this action because of two main reasons. First to decrease the pollution which hurts the environment. Secondly, by using the bicycle they thought they help to their bodies to stay healthy and fit. Both of these reasons are 30%. In the other hand the main reasons of people who used the cars to go to work are because of the comfort the cars, it was also about 40%. Also, the 21% of this people used cars because of the length of the road. The minor reasons of using bicycle was the speed of bicycle, it was about 12%, and the minor reason of using car was safety of the vehicles.
Besides of these main and minor reasons 15% of people who used bicycle though using bicycle did not have parking problem and 13% used because of bicycle costs. Likewise, the reason of 14% of the people who used cars was because of its speed compared with bicycle and 14% required cars because, with car they can carrying things easily to work.
- The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
- It has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. Do the benefits of globalisation outweigh the drawbacks? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...it was also about 40%. Also, the 21% of this people used cars because of the length ...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'carry'
Suggestion: carry
...equired cars because, with car they can carrying things easily to work.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, likewise, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53937007874 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17492872541 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425196850394 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8622397645 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6923076923 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230186080133 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101316625605 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602494687429 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184225330051 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103965832222 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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