The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them more happy.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These pie charts reveal the proportion of factors which givs satisfaction to people who are older or younger than 30 years old.
there are five section in two given charts respectively. while there are common four sectors which are involved both under and over 30 years old, one concern is different between. Firstly, the same four factors' figure is similar each category which are distinguished as age. However, it can be seen from the charts that people who are older than 30 years old are interested in being with their family, while travelling makes the young feel happy. Why there is distinction between two groups is that older group have their household while younger group should enjoy themselves.
To sum up, the rate of each parts which is represented both two groups is similar although there are 2 to 4 percent difference in each factors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... older or younger than 30 years old. there are five section in two given charts re...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sections'?
Suggestion: sections
...er than 30 years old. there are five section in two given charts respectively. while...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'section' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sections'.
Suggestion: sections
...er than 30 years old. there are five section in two given charts respectively. while...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ction in two given charts respectively. while there are common four sectors which are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91034482759 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47185344489 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634482758621 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.880944015 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116499610042 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520988014671 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251358590506 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709938858773 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325846752274 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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