Living in a country where you have to speak a foreigh language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you aggree or disagree with this statement?
Recently, there are a lot of controversies regarding that living in foreign countries causes critical problems. Some people argue that people who live in where they should use foreigh languages do not experience any problems. regarding the topic, I partially agree with the idea.
To begin with, there are several reasons why I am in favour of this issue. First, that people who live in a forign country can not use local language makes problems of communicating with domestic citizens. For example, when I live in Austrailia for working, I happened to make trouble with local citizen. I called police office to explain this incident. However, I could not be supported by them since I could not speak english. Second, immigrants can not comprehend about true meaning of native converations even if they can use a local language due to diffence of culture. that is, the locals and emigrants may experience a difficulty to understand each other. Last but not least, these problems which I mentioned above can cause social conflicts even international. if the locals and immigrants are disconnected by these problems, there will be rejection about immigrants in the locals' mind.
On the contrary, there are also the exception of these problems around the world. I believed that people can interact with foreigners although they can not comprehend other's language. For instance, there are a lot of people who know english words even can speak. many people communicate to use english words when they encounter foreigners. Moreover, if they can not know english words, they use body-language to communicate with foreigners such as sounds, acts and expressions.
To sum up, it is significant for immigrants to communicate with the locals. although many people can interact not to use a local language, speaking a foreign language can be of great help to avoiding various problems when they should live in an abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12779552716 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83265711839 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520766773163 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0247480479 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4736842105 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20889904801 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067270232128 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513730012367 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146686856627 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608063388087 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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