The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the aluminium drinks cans recycling processes. After the cans selling on vending machines, there are three main phases, starting from collecting empty cans, moving them to recycling factory, and re-producing aluminium at the recycling plant.
Firstly, aluminium cans are separated from other materials such as steel cans at collection center where empty cans from the neighborhood are gathered.
Then, empty cans in different boxes of each material are moved to the recycling center, At the center, aluminium cans are pressed by a machine to create a big block of cans.
The blocks of aluminium cans are put into the recycling plant and is heated until they melt enough to create new aluminium bars. The bars are pressed and changes their form to a thin sheet of alumimnium roll. With this roll, new aluminium cans are produced.
The cycle is completed when the new cans are slod in drinks machines. In this way, aluminium can be used over and over.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 25, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: You should probably use 'can'.
Suggestion: can
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18620689655 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55213417022 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5889537578 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153120948115 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887768806737 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687626714502 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102891270209 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624071893087 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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