The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996

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The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996

Submitted by eva2106 on Mon, 10/11/2021 - 13:23

The given bar chart depicts the proportion of expenditures in US in 2 separated years 1966 and 1996.
In general, there are some shifts in the recorded period, including a surge in cars as well as computers and a sudden decline in food.
Firstly, in 1966, the USA residents tended to spend most of their salary on food with nearly a half (44%), followed by cars with 23%. The expense in furniture, petrol, restaurant, and books made up 10%, 9%, 7% and 6% respectively. The less popular is computer which was only at 1%.
According to the second chart, the USA's expenditure received several development after 30 year period. To be more specific, most of residents started to spend money on car at a staggering number of 45%, while the figures for food plummeted to 14%. Most interesting, however, was a surge in computer at 10%, ten times higher than that in 1966. There was also a notable decrease in books to 10%. The remaining didn't receive any noticeable changes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun development seems to be countable; consider using: 'several developments'.
Suggestion: several developments
...nd chart, the USAs expenditure received several development after 30 year period. To be more specif...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the residents') or simply say ''most residents''.
Suggestion: most of the residents; most residents
...er 30 year period. To be more specific, most of residents started to spend money on car at a stag...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 408, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...decrease in books to 10%. The remaining didnt receive any noticeable changes.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, well, while, in general, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69411764706 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66812532194 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688235294118 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5851157509 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13491490324 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476951598143 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743730632726 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959303055029 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952304055609 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun development seems to be countable; consider using: 'several developments'.
Suggestion: several developments
...nd chart, the USAs expenditure received several development after 30 year period. To be more specif...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the residents') or simply say ''most residents''.
Suggestion: most of the residents; most residents
...er 30 year period. To be more specific, most of residents started to spend money on car at a stag...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 408, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...decrease in books to 10%. The remaining didnt receive any noticeable changes.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, well, while, in general, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69411764706 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66812532194 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688235294118 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5851157509 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13491490324 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476951598143 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743730632726 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959303055029 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952304055609 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.