The bar charts illustrates the information about UK graduate and postgraduate students’s who did not work in fulltime job in the year of 2008.
Can be seen from the very first chart that there were highest number of graduates went for further studies, it was 29,655. The voluntary work done by only 3500 graduate students.17,735 graduates were working in the part-time job, while 16,235 graduate students were unemployed in the year of 2008.
More, according to the destination of UK postgraduate graph, very few student interested in voluntary work, which for 345 post graduates. The graph express that 2725 numbers of post graduates were doing further studies. There were more than 1600 students unemployed while part-time job was doing by 2535 students.
To put it in or not Shalu, I pen down saying that, in the year of 2008 the fluctuation of numbers of students’s work well similar but graduates were more than postgraduates who did not attend fulltime job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'illustrate'.
Suggestion: illustrate
The bar charts illustrates the information about UK graduate and p...
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Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...graduate students’s who did not work in full time job in the year of 2008. Can be seen...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'were the highest'.
Suggestion: were the highest
...en from the very first chart that there were highest number of ledgers went for further stud...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'few students'.
Suggestion: few students
...tination of UK postgraduate graph, very few student for instance interested in voluntary wo...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...e than postgraduates who did not attend full time job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03658536585 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79784377757 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3753352536 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250107308953 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135606537865 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125599135187 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207672218546 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119963709263 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.