Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet To what extent do you agree or disagree

Food is a basic need of human and all other species. Nowadays, People face many disease throughout their food. Being a vegetarian and non-vegetarian depend on person’s mind and wish. In many point of you, I agree with the following statement. This essay will discuss my point of you and give the related example.

To begin with, firstly, being a vegetarian I have many advantages and also good for a person’s health. Nowadays, people face many disease. Green leafy vegetables provides vitamins, minerals and mining disease fighting chemicals. While, meet have many fights, which increase the person’s weight. Which is very serious problem for person’s health. Secondly, being a vegetarian home lower risk of some disease such as diabetes, blood pressure etc. Moreover person get is beautiful and glowing skin by consuming green leafy vegetables. As an epitome, coriander helps to improve eyesight of person. While, non-vegetarian food has no benefits to a person’s health as a vegetarian food.

Further more, being or non-vegetarian is sometimes, well come any disease from the chemicals to human. For instance, most dangerous Coronavirus came from the animals like cat snake etc. While, from the vegetable have less chance of transfer any disease to humans.

Conversely, non-vegetarian food has also some benefit like it has such protein and fat. It contains high amount of vitamin be. It helps for fast growing muscles, wait. As an epitome, non-vegetarian food gain weight and it me chance the thyroid disease. Vegetarian food help in dite it, and other disease like heart disease eyesight diabetes at etc.

To conclude, I find down saying that vegetarian food has many benefits for human‘s health. The is non-vegetarian has two, but it has negative impact more on human’s body.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun point seems to be countable; consider using: 'many points'.
Suggestion: many points
...an depend on person’s mind and wish. In many point of you, I agree with the following stat...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
... person’s health. Nowadays, people face many disease. Green leafy vegetables provides vitami...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27430555556 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83040212961 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.051626077 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.2916666667 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891274147942 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288155025258 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268487665976 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570377915487 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244533623555 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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