The bar chart indicates the change in the exporting values of certain commodities of a country during the period of 2015 and 2016.
By analysing the graph, it clearly emphasis that almost all the commodities have shown a steady rise in export throughout the year. However, gems and jewellery is the only exporting section which declined, it dropped by 5.18% from the previous year. Among the 5 categories petroleum and engineering goods are the most exported in terms of value of goods, which is approximately around 61 and 57billion dollars in 2015, which showed increase in export by 3% and 8.5% respectively in the next year.
Agricultural sector failed to have a huge impact on the country's export value in 2016 as it turns out to be the least growth in export while comparing with its previous year performance, it only managed to get
.81% of rise. Textile industry showed the highest hike in export of the year, which is 15.24%
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... 57billion dollars in 2015, which showed increase in export by 3% and 8.5% respec...
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...year performance, it only managed to get .81% of rise. Textile industry showed th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85093167702 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65023129868 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627329192547 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2561661206 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315404842912 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155818367794 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10216292451 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200471241116 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862342091582 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.