The charts show the proportion of male and female employees in different job categories in an engineering company in 2005 and in 2015.
The amount of male and female employees in different positions in an engineering enterprise within a ten-year period from 2005 to 2015 is depicted vividly in the given chart, the figure being mentioned in percent . Overall, whilst the rate of men working in top positions experienced a downward trend, that of women, on the contrary, were in inverse proportions to its counterpart. It is critical to notice that the rate of female administrators is the highest among all job categories and the proportions of analysts in both genders remained static after a decade.
In 2005, the rate of male directors accounted for 60%, which was 10% lower than that of male vice presidents. In the ten following years, both figures decreased significantly with 20% respectively. Similarly, the rate of male managers witnessed a moderate decline of roughly 6% after a decade. However, the rate of male administrators experienced a surge of 10% after ten years.
By contrast, in 2005 the rate of female directors (40%) was 10% higher than that of female vice presidents. Both figures declined 20% respectively for the next 10 years. The proportion for female managers increased by about 6% after 10 years. Although the rate of female administrators experienced a slight decline of 10%, it was still the first rank in 2015.
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- The charts show the proportion of male and female employees in different job categories in an engineering company in 2005 and in 2015 47
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- new technologies have changed the way for children to spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- The charts show the proportion of male and female employees in different job categories in an engineering company in 2005 and in 2015.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t, the figure being mentioned in percent . Overall, whilst the rate of men working...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, similarly, still, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06944444444 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00766715461 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7164826594 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5454545455 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255927622887 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091994639092 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890054750734 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179742349342 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105209926912 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.