The charts show the types of books sold by bestsellers between 1972 and 2012.
The pie charts give information about the kind of book that have many people bought and popular in 1972 to 2012.
Overall, it can be seen that others book were highest among five type of book in 1972, but this percentage were lower than adult’s fiction in 2012. However, it can be seen clearly if we look at the specific decline.
Look at the pie chart in 1972, it can be seen that others book were highest among five kind of book ( 25), biography, children’s fiction and adult’s fiction had the same number (20%), travel was lowest ( 15%).Meanwhile, others and biography had significantly decreased ( 20% and 15%), adult’s and children fiction were highest ( 25% and 22%).
Look at pie chart in last year in 2012, four kind of books significantly decreased just had adult’s fiction different ( from 20% to 45%). However, others, travel and biography don’t have many different ( 12%,10% and 8%). Finally, the children’s fiction increased from 20% to 25%. So, it can see that people bought book about adult’s higher from day to day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable, so consider using: 'five types'.
Suggestion: five types
...een that others book were highest among five type of book in 1972, but this percentage we...
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Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...pe of book in 1972, but this percentage were lower than adult’s fiction in 2012. How...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable, so consider using: 'five kinds'.
Suggestion: five kinds
...een that others book were highest among five kind of book 25, biography, children’s fict...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ook were highest among five kind of book 25, biography, children’s fiction and ad...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the same number 20%, travel was lowest 15%.Meanwhile, others and biography had ...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd biography had significantly decreased 20% and 15%, adult’s and children fictio...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dult’s and children fiction were highest 25% and 22%. Look at pie chart in last...
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Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable, so consider using: 'four kinds'.
Suggestion: four kinds
...Look at pie chart in last year in 2012, four kind of books significantly decreased just h...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eased just had adult’s fiction different from 20% to 45%. However, others, travel...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...others, travel and biography don’t have many different 12%,10% and 8%. Finally, the children’...
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Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and biography don’t have many different 12%,10% and 8%. Finally, the children’s ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, look, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85795454545 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53782719871 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.0285797541 43.030603864 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180264776799 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864428934409 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850799854571 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139499524868 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536792674416 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.