The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata

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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

The provided chart illustrates the average temperature and rainfall changes during the year in the city of Kolkata.

To begin the precipitation was fluctuating in the whole year. In January month, precipitation was rapidly increased from 20mm to 100mm in the following four months. In June, it reached up to 260 mm. The precipitation was at its peak in July on 330mm. After then, it was in a downward trend. Because in the following four months till November the precipitation was declined up to 20mm.

Harshly, precipitation reached the lowest point till the end of the year in December on 10 mm. However, its starting point was 20mm in January.

Overall, it is immediately apparent from the chart that the highest temperature was in May and the high point of precipitation was in July. But the lowest temperature was in January and low precipitation was in December respectively during the whole year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...After then, it was in a downward trend. Because in the following four months till Novem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00657894737 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03943808364 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2277254588 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1818181818 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8181818182 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109913987546 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486483366075 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946837439527 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107850280082 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134975620335 0.0819641961636 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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