Cocoa bean production

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Cocoa bean production

The graph illustrates data about the total amount of cocoa bean produced in six regions from 1992 to 1998.

It is striking that Africa is the top place with more than 1,500 million tons of cocoa throughout the time. It is also conspicuous that apart from North and Central America and Oceania, four remaining areas does not produced any cocoa bean.

Africa reached its peak in 1996 with nearly 2 million tons of cocoa after experiencing fluctuations in 1992 and 1994 and then fell down at the end of the period with more than just 1,800 million.

South America, Asia and Caribbean shared the same pattern of its data when decreased in 1996 and increased in 1998, 157 to 164 thousand and 94 to 98 thousand, respectively. The proportion of North and Central America remained stable throughout the whole period with no serious ups and downs. However, Oceania is the county that suffered a diminution from 41 thousand to 31 in tons.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'produce'
Suggestion: produce
... Oceania, four remaining areas does not produced any cocoa bean. Africa reached its...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84567901235 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47074021947 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.679983527 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156523194797 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757681681623 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796595574438 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114043999917 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087527712827 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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