The diagram below explains the process of recycling plastic bottles for new uses Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram elucidates information about the process how plastic bottles are recycled.
Overall ,It is crystal clear that there are several steps involved in the process of recycling of plastic bottles that starts with collection of raw material and ends with making products from recycled material.An omission of even a single step can halt the whole process.
Looking closely at the diagram ,it can be seen that firstly ,waste is thrown in a bin from where it is transported in recycle centre by truck. After it ,waste is sorted and segregated into two groups. Meanwhile,the bottles are kept aside and compressed into blocks and washed after crushing to remove impurities. Afterwards, the washed material is put in a machine so that plastic pellets would be produced. In the following step, the raw material undergoes the process of heating to produce raw material.Finally, this raw material is kept in bundles that has been used to produce products such as boxes, bottles, bags and so on .Then the whole process repeats itself
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... making products from recycled material.An omission of even a single step can hal...
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...ts from recycled material.An omission of even a single step can halt the whole pr...
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...the diagram ,it can be seen that firstly ,waste is thrown in a bin from where it i...
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...in a bin from where it is transported in recycle centre by truck. After it ,waste...
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...ed in recycle centre by truck. After it ,waste is sorted and segregated into two ...
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...he raw material undergoes the process of heating to produce raw material.Finally,...
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...aterial is kept in bundles that has been used to produce products such as boxes, ...
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...s such as boxes, bottles, bags and so on .Then the whole process repeats itself
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, look, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07058823529 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72636747061 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0104585 43.030603864 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.142857143 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186051687756 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843582907597 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753791760385 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159369941257 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577620665294 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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