The diagram below show how leather goods are produced
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant
The diagram shows the different stages in the process of converting an animal skin into leather goods.
The first stage is to hang out the animal skin on a line, in the open air to dry. After this, it is transported by lorry to the factory for processing. On arrival, it is submerged in a mixture of water and soap, and washed and then transferred to another vat where it is soaked in lime. Having been cleaned in this way, the hide is then put in a rolling machine where it is smoothed and flattened. In the next stage, it is again submerged in a liquid called tannin, which is a mixture of water and vegetable matter. This is followed by the polishing stage where small rollers are moved over the surface of the leather to produce a shine. And finally, the leather is transported to a different factory where it is manufactured into unique leather products such as bags, shoes, sports equipment and other accessories.
Overall, producing leather goods is a complicated method, but this products are very popular and have high value.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ferred to another vat where it is soaked in lime. Having been cleaned in this way...
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...fferent factory where it is manufactured into unique leather products such as ba...
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...ed into unique leather products such as bags, shoes, sports equipment and other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64673913043 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59347347753 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559782608696 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8121691948 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145383615909 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563522575112 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495042377936 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10942090641 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00986927963259 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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