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With the increasing use and development of new technology,many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rld the pace of our life at rapid stage.Many inventions are being created by peoples...
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...ions are being created by peoples hands.Most of them are being used in educational ...
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... by peoples hands.Most of them are being used in educational purposes,medicine an...
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... are being used in educational purposes,medicine and sport as well.Scientis have develop...
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Suggestion: Scientis
...nal purposes,medicine and sport as well.Scientis have developed various creations that f...
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...reations that facilitating peoples live an d work.Furthemore,there are bad side-ef...
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...hat facilitating peoples live an d work.Furthemore,there are bad side-effect of it that sh...
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...tating peoples live an d work.Furthemore,there are bad side-effect of it that should b...
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...live an d work.Furthemore,there are bad side-effect of it that should be noticed.In mu poin...
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...ide-effect of it that should be noticed.In mu point of view advantages outweigh di...
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...e of it comfortability and availibility.For instance,owing to them the quality of p...
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...ortability and availibility.For instance,owing to them the quality of performances are...
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Suggestion: , technology
...hey become more emotional. Firstly,technology is enhancing day-by-day.In our world bi...
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...stly,technology is enhancing day-by-day.In our world big part of population are an...
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...d big part of population are anti-social,egoistical or shy.For them presenting performances...
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...ation are anti-social,egoistical or shy.For them presenting performances is being h...
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...g hardship or difficult to deal with it.Moreover,some renditions are complicated to mani...
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...ip or difficult to deal with it.Moreover,some renditions are complicated to manifest ...
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...ront of people or the y are troublesome.For these people it great choice.They can u...
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...lesome.For these people it great choice.They can utilize technology from distant to ...
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Suggestion: , technological
... sure about the condition. Secondly,technological advices such as projector,monitor,displ...
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...,technological advices such as projector,monitor,display and speakers are very danger.We...
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...or,display and speakers are very danger.We retain from our childhood that majority...
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... people is being killed because of them.They were accidence when unwilling mistakes ...
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...when unwilling mistakes happened and it cause peoples life.If people more concentrate...
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...akes happened and it cause peoples life.If people more concentrate on advices the ...
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...it can be beneficial. In conclusion,i would say that technology is not a bad ...
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...t can be beneficial. In conclusion,i would say that technology is not a bad ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79820627803 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.18153199645 2.80592935109 149% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.923428311 49.4020404114 301% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 323.25 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.75 20.7667163134 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.75 7.06120827912 351% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142799446249 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849314167588 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027648464796 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849314167588 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027648464796 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.8 13.0946893788 258% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.27 50.2224549098 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.25 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.18 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.5 9.78957915832 352% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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