The diagram below shows the changes, which took place in a coastal area called Pentland from 1950 to 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagrams below.
The two maps below illustrate the evolution of Pentland, which is a coastal town, over a period of 27 years starting in 1980.
Overall, the layout of this location in 2007 was quite the same as the one in 1980. In 1980, almost all the area in Pentland was grassland However, there has been a lot of residential, commercial, and service development over the period given, including the construction of a yacht marina, shop houses, villas, and entertainment facilities, namely a swimming pool and a cinema.
First, there was an intersecting road that divided Pentland into four different areas. Two side roads were there, one to the left, which led to an industrial zone, and the other to the right, straight ahead to the car park at the end of the road, as well as the main road, which leads directly to the ocean in the north of town. The two bisecting roads were not demolished and remained unchanged in 2007, except for a half-circled road that was built around the yacht marina, which linked to the original straight road. Yet, various locations were altered throughout the period given.
Furthermore, it can be clearly seen that numerous shops were opened along the northern sides of both roads. The industrial area, located in the northwest region of the town in 1980, was demolished and renovated into a contemporary multi-story car park, which was combined with a new swimming pool and a park that was adjacent to the road that surrounded the yacht marina in 2007. On the opposite side of the main road, the car park in the east of the town was removed and many apartments were established on the upper left hand of the road that ran from west to east, bordering a half-circulated road. Additionally, in the southeast corner of the Pentland, there were a plethora of villas, whilst a new cinema was constructed on the south-western side of the Pentland.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he south-western side of the Pentland.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, except for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 965.302439024 162% => OK
No of words: 327.0 196.424390244 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79204892966 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74793742934 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 106.607317073 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525993883792 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 283.868780488 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0452085658 43.030603864 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.583333333 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0940944283093 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381732060992 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383071540494 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754662691506 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418070789577 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he south-western side of the Pentland.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, except for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 965.302439024 162% => OK
No of words: 327.0 196.424390244 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79204892966 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74793742934 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 106.607317073 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525993883792 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 283.868780488 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0452085658 43.030603864 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.583333333 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0940944283093 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381732060992 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383071540494 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754662691506 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418070789577 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.