The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology
collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce
reliable forecasts.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown
below.
The diagram below depict how Australian Bureau of Meteorology gather instantaneous information in order to produce reliable prediction about weather.We are going to write report about university lecturer.
Although, its is multi step process including incoming information,analysis and forecast,preparing for broad casting and finally broad cast but, it happen in minute or less.Despite that multiple process are operating in forecasting but most important is computer which connect all the systems.On one hand receive information from satellite, analyzed and get ready for broadcasting.
For trust worthy information production up-to-the-minute involved multiple steps.Satellite send its signals to rader also signal received by drafting buoying. Which are being received in the form of satellite photo,rader screen and synoptic chart for analysis.All these type of information are prepared for broadcasting by computer.this information then on air by radio,television and telephone recording.
- The diagram below shows the life cycle of silkworm and stages in the production of silk clothes.summarise the main information and make comparison where possible 78
- The chart below shows the different level of post-school qualification in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summaries the information by reporting the main features and make comparison where possible. 78
- Some people claim that not enough of waste from home is recycled. they say that the only way to increase the recycling is for government to make legal requirement.To what extend that laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste. 78
- The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many ofthe problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from thefact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their childr 61
- some people think that music is good way to bring people of different ages and culture together. to what extend do you agree or disagree. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...oduce reliable prediction about weather.We are going to write report about univers...
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Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , analysis
...p process including incoming information,analysis and forecast,preparing for broad castin...
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , preparing
...coming information,analysis and forecast,preparing for broad casting and finally broad cas...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
... casting and finally broad cast but, it happen in minute or less.Despite that multiple...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Despite
...d cast but, it happen in minute or less.Despite that multiple process are operating in ...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
... computer which connect all the systems.On one hand receive information from satel...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Satellite
...p-to-the-minute involved multiple steps.Satellite send its signals to rader also signal r...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , rader
... received in the form of satellite photo,rader screen and synoptic chart for analysis....
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
... screen and synoptic chart for analysis.All these type of information are prepared ...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , television
...er.this information then on air by radio,television and telephone recording.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27737226277 4.92477711251 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.72166868997 2.65546596893 140% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.751824817518 0.547539520022 137% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.45097560976 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.2567564826 43.030603864 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 215.0 112.824112599 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 22.9334400587 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275042531866 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157270855469 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870288149607 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181561784514 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937776254618 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.2329268293 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 61.2550243902 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 10.3012195122 207% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.74 11.4140731707 173% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.97 8.06136585366 136% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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