The figure gives information about weather forecasting process of Australian Bureau of Meteorology.
As can be seen from the diagram, there are totally four steps in weather forecasting process. The Astralian Bureau of Meteorology takes the incoming information from satellite, radar or drifting buoy and broadcasts the weather forecasting via some means of communication.
The up-to-the-minute information is gathered and then analysed, focasted, expressing via several types of diagram. For example, the drifting buoy incoming information is converted into synoptic chart; the radar collects information which is processed into radar screen or synoptic chart; the satellite information is either converted to satellite photo or gathered by a radar and then processed into radar screen or synoptic chart.
After the analysis and focasting stage, the information is used to prepare the weather broadcast by computer. Finally, the weather forecasts are broadcasted on three media means, namely TV newspaper, radio and recorded annoucement.
- The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. 56
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94039735099 4.92477711251 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13713020057 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4796931548 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.142857143 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210822865736 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109061928286 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534348713296 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133384272467 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412081147297 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.17 11.4140731707 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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