The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem?. What the problem this shortage of time cause?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the work-life balance issue, which is new norm in the modern world. It can be said that those who burn more hours at work than in the past and as a result, their personal life is severely affected. This essay will discuss the problems in detail and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why a working adult want to spend more time on their work and the most conspicuous one is stems from the fact that business world thrive on profits, and the leaders assign critical deadlines to their employees which in turn made them to rush to finish their tasks with little time get long-term benefits. This problem is particularly abundant in developing countries where there is a fierce competition for labour force. As an illustration, a recent study from OECD shows that almost 80 percent of young people in India and China work more than 65 hours per week. Therefore, it can be said that the longer working hours is predominantly seen in developed countries.
Nevertheless, people earning money by overtime at work, this negatively affect their health, social life and in some cases creating psychological deficiency as they do not have enough time to relax and rejuvenate their mind. Furthermore, the monotonous nature of some of the jobs will lead to depression, anxiety and even suicide in few places. Hence, people should balance their time at work by taking periodic vacation and ask for help whenever needed.
To recapitulate, although the effects of long working hours and its impact on individual time is prominent, the health and family affection cannot be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66071927932 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628472222222 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2350245795 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.454545455 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19549748737 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702609375173 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464644029242 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113671292854 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340931713511 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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