The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagram illustrates various phases of producing electricity by a hydroelectric power station.
As can be clearly observed from the diagram, gaining electricity from hydroelectric power stations consists of many different stages. First of all, a dam which is constructed across a river, gathers water at the backside as a high-level reservoir. There is an intake beneath the dam, while the intake is open during day, it is close at nights. The second step includes a relatively long pipe. The pipe guides flow of water to a power station at days and waterflow is reversed during nights by pumping through the pipe.
The next step is about a power station. It contains a generator and reversible turbines and via another smaller pipe connects to low-level reservoir. Unlike nights which turbines pumps water into high-level reservoir, they operate the generator during day time. As turbines pushes water into low-level reservoir during day, electricity is produced by generator. Then, produced electricity is distributed into power lines. Finally, electricity power is delivered to national grid to consume.
It is clear from the diagram that electricity power which is gained through this process is not only a clean energy, but also the reservoirs can play a significant role as water resources regarding agricultural purposes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ydroelectric power stations consists of many different stages. First of all, a dam which is co...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng nights by pumping through the pipe. The next step is about a power station. It ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, regarding, second, so, then, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38388625592 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91729933851 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57345971564 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4089388091 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3846153846 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164600811375 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718348645275 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651330036516 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127611999812 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587282210669 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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