The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The diagram illustrates the current produced in a hydroelectric power station. Diagram discriminate the works done during day and night time.
Overall, production of electricity mainly comprise of two reservoirs, power station and power lines.
Initially,the oicturevshoes a big dam which is collected water from river and make it as a high level reservoir. At one end of the dam there is a pipe connection to the power station, in which water flows down to the station during day time to produce electricity. When the water entered the station a reversible turbine are working inside to operate generator. Due to the which, the resulting electricity supplied through the power lines to the national grid. Moreover, extra water from turbines flows to the low level reservoir at the end in day time.
Continuing this process during night time too, such as remaining water from the power station pumped back into high level reservoir through the same pipe line. Therefore reservoir can consume water for day time works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...erall, production of electricity mainly comprise of two reservoirs, power station and powe...
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Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omprise of two reservoirs, power station and power lines. Initially,the oicturev...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...wer station and power lines. Initially,the oicturevshoes a big dam which is collec...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...during day time to produce electricity. When the water entered the station a reversi...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...l reservoir through the same pipe line. Therefore reservoir can consume water for day tim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17469879518 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77122184049 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7559443254 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205319804604 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101709975175 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105193982019 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164992126196 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837119475454 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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