Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own options.
There is a controversy in the choices made by the juveniles that a group of people insist on letting children have their personal choices about their diet, look and recreation in their lives. While the other oppose to the mentioned notion due to the society that these children will build up, filled with selfishness and individual purposes. From my perspective, I agree with the second perception because of the harm that may befall our community.
On the first hand, children is claimed to have their rights in personal aspects and will be responsible for these options. To exemplify, teenagers should make their own decisions on their education and relationship, under no circumstances may their parents affect or have influence over their choices. Henceforth, juveniles can improve their skill in making aims and purposes, or having the capability to consider various options. Moverover, during adolescence, the young generation can learn and practice responsibility if they have commited to unacceptable activities and will result in accountability and worthy decisions in the future.
On the other hand, children can become picky, selfish and overreacted once they get used to freedom at a young age. Not only will this lead to dilemmas in their upbringings but also the society can witness a trend of self- orientation. To be more particular, the young generation frequently have a tendecy towards unhealthy fast food, temporary clothes and filthy, disrespectful means of relaxation. Suppose they have the ability to fullfill the mentioned desires, teenagers will express stubbornness, unreasonable demands and careless attitude towards other people. It is the overractions that the young generation will make when their standards are not met. All the referred disadvantages can lead to the destruction and havoc of a ethical society where people live in harmony with each other.
To summerize, the notion of letting children decide their own lives and its advantages can be outweighed by the drawbacks consisting awful attitutes such as selfish, stubborn and aggressive. Thus, i personally incline to not allowing the young generation to choose their personal options.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, second, so, thus, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41764705882 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97301007858 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7640415315 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256008281346 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834095681972 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612655868661 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159546907717 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263426313991 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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