The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates about how electricity is produce from geothermal power plant from the water.

It can be clearly noticed from figure that, first of all cold water is pumpdown at a depth of 4.5 kilometres which reaches to the injection well. Then this water is transported through geothermal zone which is also known as hot rocks. After that, hot water is again pumped out with similar depth of 4.5 kms.

It can also be seen that, after the hot water is pump up, it is convey to condenser where steam is generated. These steam is usefor turbine to rotate furthermore, this rotation of turbine is used to produce the electricity in the generator. Consequently, this electricity is divert to the steel tower from where it is distribut to the other networks.

Overall, production of electricity by geothermal power plant involves five main steps starting from cold water to the electricity produced in generator and then distribution of that electricity.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: conveyed
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...is usefor turbine to rotate furthermore, this rotation of turbine is used to pro...
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...urthermore, this rotation of turbine is used to produce the electricity in the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...bine is used to produce the electricity in the generator. Consequently, this ele...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'diverted'.
Suggestion: diverted
...ator. Consequently, this electricity is divert to the steel tower from where it is dis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, so, then, well, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04375 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81385384082 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7552443706 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111455649387 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515886685849 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047165347865 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084198801771 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469611765459 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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