The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
The pictorial diagram beneath proclaims how electricity is genarated from the utilization of gethermal power.
Overall, process begins with the cold water which is injected to the hot rocks and finally turbines collect the fluid for smooth transmission of electricity.
First of all the chilled water passes down through a 4.5 kilometer long tunnel. After that, fluid flows downwards to the geothermal zone which i at the temperature of 200 degree Celsius. In continuation to smooth flow the boiling water is now sucked from the height of 4.5 kilometer.
Now in the condenser, hot water convertes to steam. Furthermore steam is utilized to empower the turbines and continuous rotation of the turbines generates enormous amount of power. Finally the energy produced by the generator is fed to the transmission high tension wired lines and through the towers electricity is distributed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icity. First of all the chilled water passes down through a 4.5 kilometer long...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d flows downwards to the geothermal zone which i at the temperature of 200 degree...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eter. Now in the condenser, hot water convertes to steam. Furthermore steam is...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ndenser, hot water convertes to steam. Furthermore steam is utilized to empower the turbin...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...nes generates enormous amount of power. Finally the energy produced by the generator is...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'towers'' or 'tower's'?
Suggestion: towers'; tower's
...igh tension wired lines and through the towers electricity is distributed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38571428571 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90737977273 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4188891697 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104091819079 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378457869539 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437066243074 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605120258013 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321498599905 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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