The given diagrams compare the Riverpark area of the present with the Riverpark area 20 years ago.
Twenty years ago, the riverpark area had a curved Estuary Road in the North, just below the estuary formed by the merger of the river coming from the north-east with the sea in the north west. A petrol station, a doctor's surgery and a library were there in a middle, to the south of the estuary Road. There was a U shaped road named the sun road, which emerged from the estuary road and circled these three buildings. A factory and few shops were there to the west of the sun road, whereas a college was there on the east of the sun road. To the right and left of these buildings woodlands were there. A sunset street emerged from the south west of the sun road and connected it to the railway track running in the east west direction towards the far south of the layout.
Radical changes can be seen in the present Riverpark area. A marina has been built on the north east side of the Estuary road. A post office has replaced the petrol station. A supermarket has been built in place of factory. The shops have almost doubled. A birdhouse has been made amidst the woodland on the right. A railway station has been made on the railway track towards the left of the sunset street. The left space of the sun road has been converted into a pedestrian road.
- Some people think that students in single sex schools perform better academically Others however believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- The diagram below shows how the instant noodles are manufactured 21
- Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects that they are good at or that they find the most interest Discuss both sides and give your opinion 61
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The map below show the village of Stoke ford in 1930 and in 2010 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
... in the north west. A petrol station, a doctors surgery and a library were there in a m...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...office has replaced the petrol station. A supermarket has been built in place of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39682539683 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16429604598 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448412698413 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.33902439024 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2475862493 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8666666667 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.09268292683 367% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0193788879026 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0057173310645 0.103423049105 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0148328620495 0.0843802449381 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.021306962534 0.15604864568 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213002919125 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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