The diagram below shows how instant noodles are made
The diagram describes the production of instant noodles.
Overall, the manufacturing of instant noodles includes eight steps, beginning with flour being kept in storage silos and ending when cups of noodles are labelled and sealed.
First of all, flour is transferred from containers to enormous storage silos. After that, the flour is delivered to a mixer when it is combined with water and oil. Next, the incorporated mixture goes through rollers which gradually turn it into extremely thin dough sheets. Before being shaped into round noodle discs, the dough sheets are finely sliced into long dough strips.
At the sixth stage of the operation, the round-shaped figures are deep-fried in boiling hot oil and then left to dry afterwards. When the dried noodle is completely dried and cool, it is put into cups together with vegetables and spices. The final step before distribution is adding labels and seals to the cups for preservation purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2012987013 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60564439155 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2650951196 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112865105001 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493923129311 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707276588772 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10009689299 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766912089201 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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