Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that oral communication is becoming more effective than written communication. However, I partly agree with this idea as it relies on some certain circumstances
It is true that oral communication plays an important role in human lifestyle. First of all it is considered as the most common means of communication due to the fact that it is the oldest form. Not all people in the world have the ability to read, such as books, newspapers,etc and they have to resort to oral communication to receive information. For example, in Viet Nam, some citizens suffer from illiteracy owing to the past war, and they just can exchange information through talking. Furthermore, spoken communication can help to improve the interaction between humans. This is mainly because, while being in face-to-face conversation, we use oral communication combined with body language or facial expression. As a result, we may easily guess the feeling of each other, and the relationship can get better and better
However, it is undeniable that written communication is significant in some fields. Regarding economy and law, written form is much more suitable as they are regarded as the valid proof to support someone’s statement while spoken form is somehow unreasonable. Additionally, written communication is sometimes quicker and more convenient. For example, instead of meeting and talking directly, people can text via email or some other social media, which is less time-consuming.
In conclusion, it is quite difficult to make a decision which form is more dominant. Both of them can be used in different situations and I believe that they can be blended in some cases to solve a problem
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ility to read, such as books, newspapers,etc and they have to resort to oral communi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20512820513 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19429461597 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5862150028 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272526023638 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100660097211 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669164876405 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168944171209 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786981576689 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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