The diagram illustrates the production of leather goods. Overall, the process consists of 11 steps, beginning with drying animal skin and ending with various leather products. Additionally, there are two machines involved in this process.
The process commences when the skin of animals is hung in a rope under the sun for dehydration, after which dry skin is transported to the factory by truck or lorry. In the factory, the skin is washed by the mixture of water and lime. Subsequently, the leather is soaked by lime before undergoing a flattening step.
Once the smoothening stage has finished, animal skin is soaked in tannin which is a compound of water and vegetable matter. The next phase is that the skin is polished by a roller, which is followed by being delivered to another factory. The final step is that the skin is processed for the purpose of generating leather products such as shoes and balls.
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- The diagram below shows how the leather goods are produced 61
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- The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced 81
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ts. Additionally, there are two machines involved in this process. The process c...
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Suggestion:
...ather products such as shoes and balls.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90967741935 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71366833597 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7170506743 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0763915041663 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428820181748 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641180227468 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584166273097 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392889317151 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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