The diagram illustrates how orange juice is generated. Overall, the process consists of 17 steps, beginning with transferring fresh oranges to the factory and ending with selling in shops. Additionally, there are three machines involved in this process.
The process commences when fresh oranges are delivered to the factory, after which ripe oranges are washed by water. Subsequently, oranges are put through an assembly line to the extracting machine before being turned into solid waste for animal feed and fresh juice. Next, a certain amount of fresh juice is packaged and sold in the supermarket while the remaining is transported to the evaporator by refrigerator truck.
Once the evaporating stage has finished, orange juice is removed from water for concentration, which is followed by a canning process for transporting to the warehouse. The final phase is that stored orange juice is rehydrated and put into bottles for the purpose of distributing to shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d fresh juice. Next, a certain amount of fresh juice is packaged and sold in the ...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the purpose of distributing to shops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35294117647 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89346929344 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7892945927 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.375 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218876179725 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115235190455 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131856306656 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151912157344 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406150142011 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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