It is claimed that an increasing number of people are migrating to large cities. However, this matter can result in unemployment and health deterioration and therefore, the government should take effective solutions to tackle the problem.
There are two main issues related to moving to the capitals. First, given the environment degradation, people staying in cities are susceptible to various illnesses. For example, in the metropolis of Vietnam, namely Hanoi or HCM city, the hazardous emissions from vehicle fumes and industrial factories substantially contribute to air contamination. This adversely affects the well-being of inhabitants and puts them at the risk of being prone to asthma and other respiratory diseases. Consequently, living in towns can pose a threat to the physical condition of residents. Second, people are likely to be in a state of joblessness when they relocate from rural to urban areas. Specifically, those seeking a job without a university degree and academic knowledge will have fewer opportunities to be recruited for medium-sized and small companies.
It is imperative that feasible measures should be taken to make a change. To be more specific, the local council might levy on unethical organizations and incentivise inhabitants to use public transport. Accordingly, this can shield these firms from discharging untreated air into the atmosphere and reduce the gas emanation of traffic. Moreover, the authority can launch vocational and training courses for inexperienced individuals in country villages. In such a way, they can enhance their skill and boost a chance of getting appropriate work, which can prevent them from leaving their hometown for a better quality of life .
To conclude, although transferring to boroughs can bring about certain difficulties, drastic actions should be devised to mitigate this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57394366197 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16175203017 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672535211268 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8627484355 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.533333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183656309036 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543787967742 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538988071624 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123107885629 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672903893859 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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