The diagram below shows how salt is removed from sea water to make it drinkable
The diagram illustrates the desalination process of seawater turned into freshwater. Overall, it is clear that the production of freshwater from saltwater requires a series of stages which can be divided into 2 parts. The first part is when saltwater is filtered and returned to the sea and the latter part including the process of drinkable water produced and distributed.
First of all, after water is taken from the sea, it experienced filtration which is pre-treatment. As soon as the filtration is done, some water is sent back to sea and the remains go to the next stage. the water is now forced through a membrane at high pressure, which salt and impurities are removed and again sent returned to sea, only water molecules are allowed to go through.
At the next stage of the process, water underwent post-treatment, where water is treated with lime, chlorine and fluoride. Once the water is purified it is stored in a storage or container. Finally, this drinkable water is distributed to households and other places.
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- In recent years sports stars have become increasingly famous and wealthy For some this is a benefit raising the profile of sports but for others it is a negative influence Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...a and the remains go to the next stage. the water is now forced through a membrane ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r molecules are allowed to go through. At the next stage of the process, water ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99418604651 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89197875222 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575581395349 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2357142053 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267665951053 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101845181682 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428738197564 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164957176562 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415022372684 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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