The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors – agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services – to the UK economy in the twentieth century.
The graph provides information about how three different industries contribute to the economic growth of the UK over a century period from 1900 to 2000. In order words, it illustrates the proportion of agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services contribution.
There were two clear trends visible, Agriculture and Manufacturing were the two major contributors to the UK economy from the outset of the period. Even though, Agriculture figures raised a little from under 50% in 1900 to just above 50% in 1950, it experienced a dramatic drop in the next 50 years. To be precise, after the year 1950, Agriculture proportion surprisingly sunk to around 10%, which was even lower than Manufacturing figure in the same year, then hit its lowest point in 2000 with under 5%. Likewise, manufacturing contribution also followed the same pattern, started with approximately 45% in 1900, the figure slowly decreased to about 15% by the end of the period, where Business and Financial sector exceed both of them.
In contrast, the business and financial proportion growth steadily over the period. In order words, it began with just under 5% then slowly increased and surpassed Agriculture figure by 1975 with 20%, while still lower than Manufacturing percentage about 10%. Finally, this sector end up as the main contributor to the UK economy with about 35% of the contribution, almost doubled the proportion of the two other in total.
Overall, from the beginning to the end of the twentieth century there was a tectonic shift between sectors contribution in the UK economy. Agriculture industry turn from the main contributor to the least important, meanwhile, the business and financial sector were reversed.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Agriculture) must be used with a third-person verb: 'figures'.
Suggestion: figures
...wly increased and surpassed Agriculture figure by 1975 with 20%, while still lower tha...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, likewise, so, still, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 965.302439024 151% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29090909091 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00070294795 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523636363636 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 283.868780488 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8273590264 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.272727273 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32158908658 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123999945677 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596665114094 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214391432742 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641807438303 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Agriculture) must be used with a third-person verb: 'figures'.
Suggestion: figures
...wly increased and surpassed Agriculture figure by 1975 with 20%, while still lower tha...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, likewise, so, still, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 965.302439024 151% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29090909091 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00070294795 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523636363636 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 283.868780488 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8273590264 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.272727273 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32158908658 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123999945677 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596665114094 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214391432742 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641807438303 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.