The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates a salmon life cycle in 8 stages from laying eggs to growing as an adult fish.
Overall, it shows the birth of a salmon in the river followed by its' rearing process has been done consequently in the river, estuary, and ocean, and then after reaches to maturation stage again moved to rivers as spawning areas.
In stage1, In rivers, salmon will come and spawn there to lay give birth to new ones. Subsequently, in the next stage, the laid eggs will undergo into incubation period before child fishes come out from them in the third stage. In stage 4, Baby fishes start rearing in the freshwater of the river and then enters into the estuary rearing where river and ocean water will get in contact as a part of stage 5.
Next, In stage 6, newly born and growing fishes migrate from estuary rearing to other rearing areas in the ocean. Here in stage 7, Comapritive to rivers, they will get enough space to grow to full of their potential and stays there until they reach their mature age. Whenever they came to maturation period, start to immigrate to spawning areas which are nothing but rivers without staying at estuaries which is shown in stage 8.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a part of stage 5. Next, In stage 6, newly born and growing fishes migrate fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62857142857 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23545944082 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3904871487 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126175288137 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748910060931 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101947075851 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122030860723 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125338430574 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.