The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as canned fruits. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process below.
The given pictogram presents the various stages involved in the production of canned pears.
Overall, the canned pear manufacturing process encompasses four key phases, commencing with manual harvesting and culminating in the distribution of the finished product.
Initially, farmers carefully handpick the pears from the orchards, which are subsequently transported to processing facilities. Upon reaching these factories, the pears undergo thorough inspection and a chemical wash to uphold their quality.
Moving on to the subsequent phase, the pears are subjected to cold storage for preservation. Subsequently, the sizable quantity of pears is weighed before being segmented into smaller portions, followed by the removal of their skins. Subsequent to this, the pears are sliced into smaller sections.
The ensuing step involves the canning and sealing of the pear slices. These hermetically sealed cans are then subjected to appropriate heat treatment. Following this, the company's logo or label is affixed onto the cans.
Finally, the finalized products are stored temporarily prior to distribution to various retail outlets throughout the city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: SUBSEQUENT_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'after'
Suggestion: After
...followed by the removal of their skins. Subsequent to this, the pears are sliced into smaller...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89880952381 4.92477711251 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97808868038 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6248396975 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159307319018 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559926950733 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340180032083 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759822290254 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301439417867 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.35 11.4140731707 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.71 8.06136585366 145% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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